I love that you brought Peter and Kitty into this and how Petey showed them the door in such a roundabout way, that tickled me. And yes there is envy still lurking within me that you're posting so lightning quick but it's a good envy so keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Tnx a lot :) Pete and Kittty just looked so right for this roles. I`ll update as soon as I can.

Interesting start, I admit I winced at the line...'black or white t-shirts, sometimes few days in a row' that's just nasty.

and I was a bit thrown by 'Oh, and we call` am Gumbo, coz he loves to gamble' isn't the Gumbo nickname cause he's cajun? anyway still enjoyed it. On to the next chapter

Author's Response: Darlin just told me that Gumbo is popular in New Orleans, I honestly had no idea. I gave him the nickname after his code name in x-men and I always connected it with gambling. I`m glad you enjoyed it anyway. And Yes that part with Logan is nasty :)

Oh my goodness I sped through this chapter and laughed and laughed when I read the last part. Now that was excellent. This is a just a fun story. I like the guys interaction, love the addition of Ororo, was wondering how you were going to bring her into this, love that they went there for strippers, love Scott in this and Vic! How he didn't want to let Ororo go was hilarious then Logan promising strippers, oh that was fun. You have a decent feel of what men would do I think or at least how women see them. I get the feeling that they're younger here, less so than in the comics anyway and I like that.

There's one thing I'm not quite sure if it was a mistake or not. Remy's called Gumbo because he's a Cajun and Gumbo (a stew in New Orleans) is very popular down there. That said it was interesting to read how you wrote that, how Ororo just agreed when his nickname was explained. I didn't know if you planned it that way, that they weren't giving out their real names and that was part of it, just joking around with her so if that's the case then that was an amusing way of doing it. Overall a very nice job with Ororo in the end and a very enjoyable story. I'll be looking forward to another update!

Author's Response: Now you made me blush ;) I`m happy you liked it and about Gumbo, honestly I didn`t know that was popular name in New Orleans, tnx for telling me :) And yes it was planned for them not to give out their real names except for Scott, (well, you know how Scott is) but Logan cut him off. ;) Oh, and they are kind of younger here.

Wow! That was freaking hilarious! Wonder how they get the car back?
This is getting really good! Can't wait for the update! Keep up the good
job! :-)

Author's Response: I`m glad you liked it I`ll try to update as fast as possible. tnx for the review :)

I'm curious that you took the first person approach. It's a hard thing to get Logan's voice, his character just right and probably considerably harder when English isn't your first language. Half the time I hardly think I have the feel of him but I've only attempted first person once and got a lot of feedback from some guys I knew, very helpful advice btw. So what I'm saying is I admire your daring. And I like the premise you have. I'm not so keen on Vic being Logan's half brother but I do like Victor so I'm curious to see him thrown into the mix interacting with the other guys which I think is seldom done.

I think it's so wonderful when someone can speak and write more than one language so I never mind when the spelling's wrong. I do, however recommend that you get a beta to help you since Pari added that to the site and there's a list of betas to choose from. Some words like beach and deam, which I think you may have meant bitch and damn respectively, are a little imperative to getting right for Logan and Victor I think. If you can't find anyone I'd be happy to help you providing you didn't have long chapters. I can't say I'm a good beta and I sometimes think I let my own style get in the way . I'm actually looking forward to seeing where you're going with this and what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and I appreciate your offer and I`m happy that you liked my story. I put Vic in this because I like him very much and I like reading stories in which he`s involved so instead of looking for stories with him I decided to write one and about the half-brother thing, I saw that in x-men wolverine they presented them like that so I decided to take it in that direction.. About damn and bitch I knew I was spelling them wrong but I couldn`t remember there right form, so really thank you for spelling them to me. In my first language you spell it like you tell it if you know what I mean ;) And I feel really honored to have a review from you because I see you as one of the best writers on this side and I`v read all your stories (seriously) and I loved them so thank you again :))