Chapter 1 was well written and descriptive. This chapter was confusing. You hint at danger "Logan felt his senses going wild" when he enter the danger room but downplay it to him only sensing Ororo and not the 2nd woman. Why? Also why Storm didn't confront her? You know if a stranger in your house you wouldn't wait. The fighting scene was not as descriptive as the dancing in chapter 1. In other stories I read it was great when you saw it from one of the character's point of view: the frustration in not getting a hit, the pain of the nicks and cuts, the plotting to take her down. Also how did she get in? High tech facility, mutants everywhere and no one sense her?
Sorry about my ramblings. Hope I didn't offend you or your writing. Like the original theme of the story Logan being uncharacter.

Author's Response: LOl no offense taken whatsoever, I did most of the nondescriptiveness on purpose. Wait my friend wait. It will all become clear in time. :)