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Reviewer: I agree Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03-02-04 - 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1- Welcome to...........

with polite because Storm's just too vulgar to enjoy the story much. She's like a female Logan but it's an interesting concept.

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-04 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter 1- Welcome to...........

Pretty good and funny to me, actually. Why not continue? Go right ahead.

Reviewer: polite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-29-04 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1- Welcome to...........

I liked the story and would like to read more, but don't you think that logan would be able to tell if storm had sex the night before. You know what with the super senses and all. I also just can't see Ororo swearing so much. I know this a way i have never seen her before but i guess i just can't see her so vulgar. Any who i still liked the direction of the the story and look forward to reading more.;-)

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