Hmm! Intriguing! It's so nice to see Logan's 'Origin's incorporated into a story. Very nice. And the past between Remy and Ororo was beyond surprising. I can't wait to see what may lie ahead for each of these characters for better or worse. Now in all good conscious I have to mention that there were a few typos such as ‘relieving’ instead of ‘reliving’ and I thought you'd want to know that whenever you end a line with quotation marks and someone's speaking and you have something like: 'Okay," He said - he shouldn't be capitalized. For example: "You ready?" she asked. It's still part of the sentence I suppose. Finally you slipped into present tense with Remy - Remy paces instead of Remy paced. Hope this helps you and please don't take it the wrong way because I'm really enjoying your story especially the fast updates and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.