Penname: smalltowngirl [Contact] Real name: Amber
Member Since: 01-15-06
Membership status: Member
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Okay so Summer Break has started and now that I have time from school, I can finally start writing again and updating some of my stories! My first update should be on tonight or tomorrow!
Amber!
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Writers Block by Mimz Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: It’s a story inside a story. Ororo is writing a book, but she gets writers block when her boyfriend of three years Warren dumps her for some English girl. Warren was her inspiration, but at her friends club-where she sings-on a Saturday night she meets someone new, Logan, and he gives her new hopes, and along the way she finds love. She also finds out that Logan is like one of the characters in her story-William. Non-mutant fic.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1828 Read Count: 1364
[Report This] Published: 07-29-06 Updated: 07-29-06
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 02-13-07 Title: Chapter 1: Meet the writer

Nice story so far. I can't wait to read more when you add it.

Summary: Yes, the rhymes are horrible. Yes, it’s silly. Now I dare you to write one, too. Based on X3. This is what I imagined was going through Storm’s mind during that pretty scene when she’s stirring up the weather and summoning those dark storm clouds.
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Comedy, Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 651 Read Count: 2374
[Report This] Published: 09-12-06 Updated: 09-12-06
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 07-01-10 Title: Chapter 1: Staring into the Clouds

Lol! Very funny! Loved the last line:-) The rhymes aren't that horrible! It is way better then what I could ever dream of doing:-)

-Amber

Author's Response: It\'s taken me this long to respond, but thanks, smalltown. I had fun with it, and I might write more holiday drabbles and rhymes eventually as my time and muse allow.

Summary: How do you bring together two people who have been there, done that, have seen it all, and decided “No, thank you?” Show them that they don’t know everything they think they know. RoLo, alternate verse. If you’re looking for claws and lightning bolts, look elsewhere.
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Comedy, Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151344 Read Count: 52616
[Report This] Published: 10-15-06 Updated: 05-02-07
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 02-04-07 Title: Chapter 1: No Man's Land

This is a great story. You are a great author.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm flattered. You craft a great story yourself! I appreciate the visit.

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01-01-70 Updated: 01-01-70
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 01-31-07 Title: None

This is a good start. You could try to add a little more detail though. And some of your lines like right after Ororo has struck people with lighting needs to me changed. They make it sound like Ororo doesn't care about what she just did which is a major understatement. But you should continue and try to take some of this suggestions seriously.

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01-01-70 Updated: 01-01-70
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 02-02-07 Title: None

This is a good start. Hopefully you will continue this. I really want to know if Logan and Ororo see each other again.

Author's Response: I'm going to definitley continue this story! I'm pretty sure they will see each other again... :)

Silk and Smoke by NikNak Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 16]
Summary: In an AU, Ororo Munroe is being dragged back home to her dysfunctional family by her father's bodygaurd. She knows she should be careful but she can't resist poking and prodding a Wolverine. Soon enough, some animals strike back....
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12763 Read Count: 8803
[Report This] Published: 03-03-08 Updated: 04-24-08
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 03-25-08 Title: Chapter 2: Tension

This is a good story. You should continue it

Getaway by OriginalCeenote Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 137]
Summary: An escapist vacation. A one-night stand between two strangers. A small world…
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136677 Read Count: 55418
[Report This] Published: 04-07-08 Updated: 08-26-16
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 08-14-08 Title: Chapter 1: Wishes

This is a great story!! You are an amazing writer. Hope you liked the new chapter I added!!

Author's Response: As a matter of fact, I did like it! I can't wait to see how you flesh out Logan's character, and if he acts like a celebrity himself. Glad you got to read this and liked it, smalltown. -Cee

Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 03-04-09 Title: Chapter 9: Catch Me When You Can

I love this story! It is by far one of the best!

Author's Response: aw, thanks! Glad you're enjoying it so far!

Summary: **New Chapter** Post The Last Stand. A sunset ritual and a kiss under the moonlight. What could be better?
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2947 Read Count: 3959
[Report This] Published: 04-08-09 Updated: 08-11-09
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 08-12-09 Title: Chapter 1: Sunset Rituals - One-shot

Aww that was so cute! I loved it and I'm glad you added on to this! It was absouletly adorable! It made me smile! - Amber

Author's Response: Aw! Thanks again, hun, for reviewing! Your comments always make me smile! :D

Summary: A new student from Ororo's mysterious past arrives at the school with her guardian. With them come questions Ororo didn't want answers to and memories of the storms of her life. Her childhood will come back to haunt and endanger her.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Horror
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Situations, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8243 Read Count: 31544
[Report This] Published: 07-06-09 Updated: 08-16-09
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 08-18-09 Title: Chapter 6: Feelings

Great update! Took you long enough, just kidding! I loved it, you are a great writer and I am enjoying this fic. I meant to leave you a review earlier, but I kind of got sidetracked! Anyway, awesome job!- Amber

Author's Response: Itscool. And I realize it's been a while since I've updated, but I've been going through some stuff so I promise to get back on track with writing! Its people like you that encourage me! Thanks so much :D

Our Time by friyourass Rated: 15 Round robin Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Death fic to The Smiths.
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1646 Read Count: 2536
[Report This] Published: 07-29-09 Updated: 08-01-09
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 07-29-09 Title: Chapter 1: There Is A Light That Never Goes Out



Wow. That was totally unexpected. I never did think that
Ro would do something like that:

Author's Response: Well when shit has been happening to you for your whole life I'd think one day you'd just snap and do some craaaaaaaazy shit. There's is more to come. Stay Tuned ;D

Summary: After an affair with a married X-Man, Ororo finds herself pregnant, and alone. -- a 1992 Xmen TAS fanfic - takes place after the whole "Phoenix Saga"
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25232 Read Count: 30392
[Report This] Published: 08-05-09 Updated: 08-05-09
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 08-08-09 Title: Chapter 1: Disclaimers and stuff

I liked this story! I thought that it was well written and it had a perfect mixture of all emotions...sad, funny, angry etc. -Amber

Author's Response: Thanks Amber, it was a challenge to come up with the perfect mixture of emotions, hoping it wouldn't come off to one kind of emotion one way or the other :) I'm glad you liked it :)

Summary: Even when she’s asleep, she’s a goddess.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 823 Read Count: 1776
[Report This] Published: 08-07-09 Updated: 08-07-09
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 08-08-09 Title: Chapter 1: Still asleep, still a goddess

That was so heart warming! I loved it! It made me smile. - Amber

Author's Response: Aww!! Thanks, hun!

Summary: A fairy tale with a not so happy ending!
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 404 Read Count: 1598
[Report This] Published: 08-08-09 Updated: 08-08-09
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 08-10-09 Title: Chapter 1: Not so happily ever after

Okay, you asked me to review this and tell you what I think. I agree with Cee, you could make this a chaptered story. All of the ideas that she gave you are wonderful ideas. If you do decide to take that route, just try to add more detail. You said that the detail is tricky, try to imagine what something smells like, feels like, or tastes like and you can make wonderful descriptions.
Your grammar is amazing. If you take the advice that you have been given and added detail this story would be awesome. However, if you decide to leave it short that is okay...although you gave me the impression that you wanted it to be longer. As we give you reviews, just remember to take everything with a grain of salt, if you think it will really help your writing, then use it, but don't completely change your style or ideas to suit someone else. I'm happy that you chose to share your first fic with us and I hope that this review will help you and encourage you to share more. Thank you for this.

Amber

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I feel honored that you took the time to read this AND review! This is really helpful! -Lexia!

Summary: **Previously named The Goddess and The Animal** A series of drabbles, because who better than the goddess and the animal? Ororo/Logan, Storm/Wolverine, RoLo, you get the idea.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1002 Read Count: 11058
[Report This] Published: 08-17-09 Updated: 10-27-09
Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked
Date: 08-18-09 Title: Chapter 1: Because of You

Wow, this sounds very promising! I can't wait for your next update, will it be longer? -Amber

Author's Response: Lol, they are each 100 words every chapter, so aside from the A/N's and Summaries, probably not. Thanks for reviewing!