I actually teared up as I read the ending. This was such a beautiful story, just truly wonderful. I don't even have enough adjectives to describe it! Superb. Just very simple, very realistic, nothing overdone, all so believable and touching. Touching is a good description. I don't recall being touched by such a story or at least not in a great while and then they're usually death stories and one shots. Even the parts with Scott and Logan had a nice emotional feel to them, Logan's coming to terms with the boy leader who rather grows up and especially where they were working on the car together, perfect male bonding. Truthfully I don't think this story could get much better! Lovely job, Minarya! I'm glad you finally found your way to the Realm!

Your drabbles make me smile! :D

Author's Response: Thanks!! Just started with Drabbles. Had attempted earlier, but that idea grew into a series of sort.

I'll say! Another nice drabble. :D

Author's Response: Thanks Darlin'.

Sinjin, I love Stargate so the idea of putting them in that universe is enjoyable. I’m really curious to see where you’re going with this.


Author's Response: to tell the truth Darlin so am I

I like the premise of your story but Ororo being thought strange and dark and her mother wanting her to be pale is a little hard for me to swallow. I'm not trying to be harsh and critical but Ororo is after all Black with dark brown skin. I don't know, maybe I'm being too picky. I do think your story has potential. I enjoyed the book and the mini series immensely, even the movie wasn't bad, and Logan is perfect for Darcy so aside from the race issue it's fun to read and it's a neat idea.

Author's Response: Yes I understand your concern, but as it is as you said a fact that Ororo is dark brown-black, there have to be reactions to her looks when the story doesn't take place in the regular Marvel Universe. The social standards in my fic is more or less like in the 18th century England, were fair skin were preffered. I will include mutants with more striking features than Ro's and even if they (mutants) are more or less accepted, they will not be considered as beautiful as the "normal" looking one. In the P&P novel, the author makes a point that Jane is seen as more beautiful than Elizabeth. Mr Bingleys sisters even complained that Elizabeth was tanned I believe. I hope this will be easier to accept as the story progress. You are welcome with your criticism =) I want to improve afterall! =)

W6C, it's good to see you posting and even better to know you’re working on the next chapter! One thing for sure this is a story that’s well worth the wait. Welcome back!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Darlin'... it feels pretty good bein' back an' I'm certainly glad to see that "Eye" has stood the test of time. I'm editing Ch. 20 now and will keep postin' them up as I continue work on Ch. 27. It's great to be back, thanks again. --- W6C

Oh! That last part was great! Um, give us a minute. I loved that. But everything was good. Great action and great descriptions, especially the RoLo ones with the way you compare them, children of the earth, son of the forest, daughter of the sky. Good, good work but could I expect any less?

Author's Response: I hope not. *grins* But you can expect more with Ch. 27. Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it. --- W6C

Now this is getting intriguing beyond words. I personally like Sabertooth, I just can't help myself, so I'm very curious that he seems to want to help. It's whet my appetite! As always well done, W6C.

Author's Response: I like Sabretooth too. I just like him more three dimensional than we've been allowed to see of him in the comics. Well remember in an earlier chapter where he was reminiscing about when he first met Logan... way back in their youth, when Victor was thrilled to meet someone who had gifts that rivaled his own.... Well, we'll be touchin' on that again. Thanks for the FB Darlin, It's appreciated --- W6C