Membership status: Member
Bio:
Okay so Summer Break has started and now that I have time from school, I can finally start writing again and updating some of my stories! My first update should be on tonight or tomorrow!
Amber!
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1828 Read Count: 1365
Date: 02-13-07 Title: Chapter 1: Meet the writer
Nice story so far. I can't wait to read more when you add it.
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Comedy, Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 651 Read Count: 2377
Date: 07-01-10 Title: Chapter 1: Staring into the Clouds
Lol! Very funny! Loved the last line:-) The rhymes aren't that horrible! It is way better then what I could ever dream of doing:-)
-Amber
Author's Response: It\'s taken me this long to respond, but thanks, smalltown. I had fun with it, and I might write more holiday drabbles and rhymes eventually as my time and muse allow.
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Comedy, Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151344 Read Count: 52617
Date: 02-04-07 Title: Chapter 1: No Man's Land
This is a great story. You are a great author.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm flattered. You craft a great story yourself! I appreciate the visit.
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Date: 01-31-07 Title: None
This is a good start. You could try to add a little more detail though. And some of your lines like right after Ororo has struck people with lighting needs to me changed. They make it sound like Ororo doesn't care about what she just did which is a major understatement. But you should continue and try to take some of this suggestions seriously.
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Date: 02-02-07 Title: None
This is a good start. Hopefully you will continue this. I really want to know if Logan and Ororo see each other again.
Author's Response: I'm going to definitley continue this story! I'm pretty sure they will see each other again...
:)
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12763 Read Count: 8807
Date: 03-25-08 Title: Chapter 2: Tension
This is a good story. You should continue it
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136677 Read Count: 55420
Date: 08-14-08 Title: Chapter 1: Wishes
This is a great story!! You are an amazing writer. Hope you liked the new chapter I added!!
Author's Response: As a matter of fact, I did like it! I can't wait to see how you flesh out Logan's character, and if he acts like a celebrity himself. Glad you got to read this and liked it, smalltown. -Cee
Date: 03-04-09 Title: Chapter 9: Catch Me When You Can
I love this story! It is by far one of the best!
Author's Response: aw, thanks! Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2947 Read Count: 3959
Date: 08-12-09 Title: Chapter 1: Sunset Rituals - One-shot
Aww that was so cute! I loved it and I'm glad you added on to this! It was absouletly adorable! It made me smile! - Amber
Author's Response: Aw! Thanks again, hun, for reviewing! Your comments always make me smile! :D
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Horror
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Situations, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8243 Read Count: 31545
Date: 08-18-09 Title: Chapter 6: Feelings
Great update! Took you long enough, just kidding! I loved it, you are a great writer and I am enjoying this fic. I meant to leave you a review earlier, but I kind of got sidetracked! Anyway, awesome job!- Amber
Author's Response: Itscool. And I realize it's been a while since I've updated, but I've been going through some stuff so I promise to get back on track with writing! Its people like you that encourage me! Thanks so much :D
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1646 Read Count: 2539
Date: 07-29-09 Title: Chapter 1: There Is A Light That Never Goes Out
Wow. That was totally unexpected. I never did think that
Ro would do something like that:
Author's Response: Well when shit has been happening to you for your whole life I'd think one day you'd just snap and do some craaaaaaaazy shit. There's is more to come. Stay Tuned ;D
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25232 Read Count: 30420
Date: 08-08-09 Title: Chapter 1: Disclaimers and stuff
I liked this story! I thought that it was well written and it had a perfect mixture of all emotions...sad, funny, angry etc. -Amber
Author's Response: Thanks Amber, it was a challenge to come up with the perfect mixture of emotions, hoping it wouldn't come off to one kind of emotion one way or the other :) I'm glad you liked it :)
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 823 Read Count: 1776
Date: 08-08-09 Title: Chapter 1: Still asleep, still a goddess
That was so heart warming! I loved it! It made me smile. - Amber
Author's Response: Aww!! Thanks, hun!
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 404 Read Count: 1600
Date: 08-10-09 Title: Chapter 1: Not so happily ever after
Okay, you asked me to review this and tell you what I think. I agree with Cee, you could make this a chaptered story. All of the ideas that she gave you are wonderful ideas. If you do decide to take that route, just try to add more detail. You said that the detail is tricky, try to imagine what something smells like, feels like, or tastes like and you can make wonderful descriptions.
Your grammar is amazing. If you take the advice that you have been given and added detail this story would be awesome. However, if you decide to leave it short that is okay...although you gave me the impression that you wanted it to be longer. As we give you reviews, just remember to take everything with a grain of salt, if you think it will really help your writing, then use it, but don't completely change your style or ideas to suit someone else. I'm happy that you chose to share your first fic with us and I hope that this review will help you and encourage you to share more. Thank you for this.
Amber
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I feel honored that you took the time to read this AND review! This is really helpful! -Lexia!
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1002 Read Count: 11067
Date: 08-18-09 Title: Chapter 1: Because of You
Wow, this sounds very promising! I can't wait for your next update, will it be longer? -Amber
Author's Response: Lol, they are each 100 words every chapter, so aside from the A/N's and Summaries, probably not. Thanks for reviewing!