Beautifully written so far. I love Pride and Prejudice, and I love AU's, so as far as I'm concerned this is perfection.

Author's Response: Oh Gosh! I really hope I can live up to your expectations. So far the updates have been slow, but I do my best! The P&P book and series (the BBC adaption) is wonderful =)

Wow, that's all I have to say so far. If there's anything I love more than the X-Men, it's vampires. You beautiful descriptive skills, like when you described the club and Ororo's vampire-esque eyes, I was definitely seeing all that. I started this last night and hoped to finish it by later tonight, but eh, something just came up. Such is my life. But I'll definitely finish reading and reviewing this as soon as I can (along with your other story). :)

Wow, way to go for the jugular, Storm. I am really emjoying this story. You really have a way of telling this story that just leaves me breathless and yearning for more.

I've always liked the idea of Pietro and Ororo together. (Blame it on those old AOA comics.) I can't wait until he's really in the picture. That's going to stir up a lot of trouble. I loved how Logan enlisted Jubilee and Kitty to help him in his "quest." Just call the the girl detectives. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: I thought it was weird to see them hinted at again in House of M. I thought it was a one time deal in AOA. Are they trying to tell us something...well not anymore I supose. But yeah in upcoming chapters more Tro/Ro and way more Rolo.

Don't listen to his lies, Marie. He'll freeze you from the inside out if you mess up. He's sweet, but he ain't that sweet. *cough* Loved that Superman banter because sadly it's true. ;) More plot turns afoot! I love it. Bets, yay! :D Geez, I know I'm s'pose to be rooting for the RoLo but I can't help loving 'Ro and Pietro. :D Excellent job.

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking around for this. Glad your liking the tro/ro thing, I finally found out what I'm gonna do with it. He'll show up again real soon. Promise. And Betsy??? Who said that was Bets? Sike. I'm just playin. But yeah, I love how she's gonna be very important in all of this! Thanks for the compliments. I heart them.

You've done an excellent job in painting the gritty world they live in, but despite all that, they share something that transcends even that and becomes something beautiful despite the desperation of their situation. Can't wait to read more. :D

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to notice the details. I wasn't sure if I was overbearing in that department or not giving enough. This particular Rolo'ism is so close to my heart. I hope I can do it justice.

All this young love. It's so sweet. :D I couldn't help chuckling when I read this: "What they heck could they have cloned her from in the first place? Cotton balls and an old piece of string? Sugar and spice? Belly button lint?" I loved how everything's all calm with the kids and all and then BAM! you turn the story completely. Excellent. Loving it. :)

Author's Response: If the story was all calm...no one would want to read it! You know me. I like to get a rise out of people. I'm bad, so very bad...slapping my own hand. In the comics, I always wondered how Sinister cloned Jean, when getting Madelyne and Scott to have a kid was such a laborious process! Marvel characters are always so loose with their kids that they didn't know they had and with losing spare bits and pieces of their DNA. It's just shameless! Thanks for reading.